Friday 20 May 2016

Cinquain Poems

Well this week was just too difficult to choose just one "Writer of the Week" so we have 22 (one to come)!  The children have been learning the format and experimenting with writing Cinquain poems.  The format is:
Noun
Adjective, adjective
-ing word, -ing word, -ing word
A phrase
Synonym for the noun

The children selected their personal favourite to publish on here.  Enjoy!

Bike
GT, Giant
Skidding, jumping, racing
Racing is amazing
Fast.
By Otis

Playground
Fun, play
Sliding, flying, laughing
Children scattering
Amazing.
By Sophie

Autumn
Crunchy, colourful
Whirling, twirling, swirling
Flying all around in the
Fall.
By Lily M

Park
Nosey people
Playing, trying, sliding
People are playing great
Playground.
By Adam

BMX
Fast, cool
Jumping, pedalling, racing
Fast BMX
Bike.
By Jack S

Animals
Fun, playful
Barking, howling, roaring
Animals are cute
Pets.
By Archie

Ships
Splish, splash
Honking, tooting, splashing
Ships let out steam
Boats.
By David

Grandparents
Adventurous, confident
Helping, caring, knowing
Nana’s and Pop’s are helpful
Parents.
By Casey

Alia
Fun, silly, flexible
Swimming, baking, farming
Alia is awesome
Forever
By Alia

Art
Hard, joyful
Scratching, creating, thinking
Challenging yourself
Draw.
By Jelena

Dogs
Fluffy, big and small
Wagging, barking, jumping
I like dogs
Puppies.
By Dusty

Shearing
Sheep, Llama
Jumping, barging, shaving
It is hard work
Shearing.
By Hayvin
  
Monster
Red, green, dotted, speckled
Smashing, crashing, falling
Don’t make these guys angry
Alien.
By Mason

Horses
Gallop, canter
Bucking, rearing, trotting
Black ones, white ones, all colours
Herds.
By Amelia K

Hairy Maclary
Donaldson’s Dairy
Yipping, scattering, winning
Hairy Maclary from Donaldson’s Diary
Dog.
By Lars

Kittens
Fluffy, adorable
Cuddly, combing, caring
Kittens love…
Scratching
By Lily A

Puppy
Cute puppy
Eating, jumping, twirling
Fluffy puppy
Adorable
By Charlotte K

Cats
Small, big
Running, climbing, eating
Cats are cool
Fluffy.
By Charlotte O
  
Dogs
Furry, little and big
Barking, wagging, jumping
Dog.
By Payton


Winter
Cold, frozen
Freezing, icing, ice-skating
Winter is cold
Freeze.
By Jack O

Dog
Fun, silly
Playing, hugging, loving, caring
Dogs are cool.
Dog
By Greer

Planes
Screech, zoom
Flying, buying, downing
Higher, higher, you can hardly see it
Private plane.
By Quinn


2 comments:

  1. Wow. These are great. Well done room 3! Lots of you like animals..
    Casey's Mum

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  2. Amazing poetry Room 3 - you all use some great words and show off your excellent vocabularies!

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